day 3 at Disney land

       I woke up late so I had very little time to eat at the little breakfast place at the hotel.  After breakfast we walked over to the gates to Disney land.  When we finished getting threw the supped bag checking we heeded over to splash mounten to get fast passes but on the way we got stopped bye a man doing a Disney triveya were if you win u get free fast passes for splash mounten but that doesn't count for the amount of fast passes you can have.  When we were done getting fast passes we notes ed there was no line for the haunted manchin so we prity much walked onto the ride.  After the awesome haunted manchin we found some kids with humungis cinnamon roles so of cors we asked them were they got the cinnamon roles and it tornd out they got them right in front of the haunted manchen so we bout two then when over to some picnic tables to eat our lunch and the cinnamon roles.  After lunch we used both of our fast passes on splash mounten.  For the first ride Nick sat in front but for the second ride I got to sit in front were I got soaked.  We did a lot more rides but it has bean a fey weeks so I cant member but at the end of the day we whent to the big fire work show which  was awesome.  The fire works wore clomped up then spread apart, there was different references from different movies, I cant describe it ennuf so you will just have to go and see it.  After a long day we needed to do one more ride to close the park so we went on my moms faverat ride, Pierets of the Caribbean.  Disney land has bean a ball,  we've done so much but now it is time to go to my great grand parents house in Sandeago.

day 2 at Disney land

       Today we are going right next doer from Disney land, California adventurers.  Me and my family leave the small hotel room at 7:45 so we can get to California adventurers so we can get fast passes for the most popular ride, Radiator Spring Racers, because the line gets so long so fast.  When we get into the park it turns out that the rides open at 9 am so we get horded like cattle at the gate.  When we got to the rides we sent my dad to get fast passes for Radiator Spring Racers will the rest of us got tickets to see the night time showing of world of color.  Will we whated for the fast passes to be usable we walked over to bugs land were we played bumper cars and go into a little water sprayer to cool off.  After bugs land we went over to see the trailer for maleficent in the bugs land theater.  Then we strolled over to the tower of terror because it was one of my favorite rides in Disney world.  When we got on the ride my mom made me sight next to her because I was the one making her go on her least favorite ride, which I have to say was a mistake. Then we had lunch over buy the  Muppet 3-D show because we missed the first showing.  The show was rely well done, it had so many special affects even on the wall.  When the show ended we sprinted over to cars vill so we could use the fast passes on  Radiator Spring Racers and skip probably one hour of line time.  The ride's special affects on the cars was cool and the racing part was awesome but it is definitely not worth waiting over an hour to go on.  After the radiator spring's rides we went over to California screaming which we did 3 times because Nick loved it so much.  Then we went over to the toy story mainea were u play five fun games.  Then we went and did the ether rides in that area.  after a long day we went to the pear to watch world of color which was cool but probably cooler if we could see it over the people video taping it.

day 1 at Disney land

      Tuesday me and my family all hoped into the wight saber ban and drove for 6 hours until we reached the funnest plays in the world, Disney Land.  On the first day we found out one of our faveret ride, Space Mounten, was closed for refurbishment.  First on our list was mater horn and the buzz light year shooting game.  In the buzz light year game, I was partnered up with my oldest bro Chris and I smoked him point wise.  After toomaro land we went to our next stop was the pirets ride near buy the indeana jones ride so we got fast passes for Indiana Jones.  Wons we were done with the piret ride we went over to fantase land, did all of the rides there then went over to the haunted mention and splash mounten were we got soaked.  Then we went to the new toon town were we went on the rides there which were a lot of fun. After a long day we got on the Disney express over to the wonderful show Fantasmik.

WHY YOU SHOULD GET A DOG

         You should get a dog because dogs are phenomenal pets.  Dogs will stay with you forever.  Having a short-haired dog is good for makings sure your house is not covered in your dog's hair.  Dogs are cute a comfortable.  Dogs are phenomenal pets to posses.
   
         Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.  As a dog owner, you can get out and run and bike with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog, you both get exercise.  Exercising with your dog is fun and food for your health.

         Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you come home.  Scientists have proven that when you are loved and you know it, then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

          Having a short-haired dog is better than a long-haired dog.  Because the dog doesn't shed, the house stays cleaner than if you had a long-haired dog.  Short-haired dogs get less fleas than dogs with longer hair.  Short-haired dogs don't need to be bated as often, so you don't  smell a wet dog.

           A dog is one of the best pets to have.  A dog will love and accompany you forever.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise because they love to get out and play.  A short-haired dog is perfect because it don't need as much grooming as as a long-haired dog.  Dogs are wonderful pets to possess.

final draft

     
        You should get a dog because dogs are funomanal for exercise.  Dogs will stay with you for ever. having a short-haired dog is good for keeping your house covered in your dog's hair.  Dogs are cute and comfortuble.  Dogs are funomanal pets to have.

        Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as a motivation to get exercise.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise and health.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  Because a short-haired dog doesn't shed the house will stay cleaner than if you had a long-haired dog.  Short-haired dogs get leas fleas than a longer-haired dog.  a short-haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't smell a wet dog.  Short-haired dogs require less entente than a long-haired dog. 

      A dog is one of the best pets to have.  A dog will love and company you for ever.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise because they love to get out and play.  a short-haired dogs is perfect if you don't wont the dog shedding every were.  Dogs are wonderful pets to posses. 

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        You should get a dog because dogs are funomanal for exercise.  Dogs will stay with you for ever. having a short-haired dog is good for keeping your house covered in your dog's hair.  Dogs are cute and comfortable   Dogs are funomanal pets to have.

        Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as a motivation to get exercise.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise and health.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  Because a short-haired dog doesn't shed the house will stay cleaner than if you had a long-haired dog.  Short-haired dogs get leas fleas than a longer-haired dog.  a short-haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't smell a wet dog.  Short-haired dogs require less entente than a long-haired dog. 

      A dog is one of the best pets to have.  A dog will love and company you for ever.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise because they love to get out and play.  a short-haired dogs is perfect if you don't wont the dog shedding every were.  Dogs are wonderful pets to posses. 

WHY TO GET A DOG draft 3

      Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as a motivation to get exercise.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise and health.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  A short haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't need to smell a wet dog.  Short haired dogs get less fleas then a long haired dog.  Because it doesn't shed the fur doesn't get in your food or your mouth.  The fur doesn't get in your computer and make it hairy.  A short haired dog is a much better then a long haired dog.

      A dog is one of the best pets to have.  A dog will love and company you for ever.  Dogs are wonderfull for exercise because they love to get out and play.  a short-haired dogs is perfeckt if you don't wont the dog sheding every were.  Dogs are wonderfull pets to posses. 

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      Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as a motivation to get exercise.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise and health.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  A short haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't need to smell a wet dog.  Short haired dogs get less fleas then a long haired dog.  Because it doesn't shed the fur doesn't get in your food or your mouth.  The fur doesn't get in your computer and make it hairy.  A short haired dog is a much better then a long haired dog.

      A dog is one of the best pets to have.  A dog will love and company you for ever.  Dogs are wonderful for exercise because they love to get out and play.  a short-haired dogs is perfect if you don't wont the dog shedding every were.  Dogs are wonderful pets to posses. 

WHY TO GET A DOG DRAFT 2

 

      Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as an motivation to get exercise.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  A short haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't need to a wet dog.  Short haired dogs get less fleas then a long haired dog.  Because it doesn't shed the fur doesn't get in your food.
A short haired dog is a bit better then a long haired dog.

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      Having a dog is great for exercise.  Dogs typically love to get out and play and run.   As a dog owner ,you can get out and bike and run with the dog.  When you run and bike with the dog you both get exercise which is good for your heart.  Because the dog loves to get out and get exercise, you can yous that as an motivation to get exercise.

      Having a dog is great for companionship.  Dogs are very loyal and will stay with you and accompany you whenever you need it.  The dog will always be happy to see you when you com home.  Scientist have proven that when you are loved and you now it then you will live a longer and happier life.  A dog is great for companionship and will always be happy to see you.

      Having a short haired dog is great for keeping the shedding level down.  A short haired dog doesn't need to be bathed as often so you don't need to smell a wet dog.  Short haired dogs get less fleas then a long haired dog.  Because it doesn't shed the fur doesn't get in your food or your mouth.  The fur doesn't get in your computer and make it hairy.  A short haired dog is a bit better then a long haired dog.